Hear My Cry
 

Hear My Cry
Yo,

ive been sittin here underhanded so pensively~
sorrows have began to build my lifes jauntily~
amiably threatin about the pain and the hatred~
the worlds beginin to give up, its deeply tiered~
Expansive to the crimes, the dimes, the lives,(of death)
so i sit, please hear this young kids cry
Pain, Sufferage, Segragation, the world has become
other people have become boosted, disdainfully~
this people dont kno what its like to be testily~
demands, furrowed, audible screams of horried, (pain)
cant we gain, stop this pain, of lifes deducing~

these kids have become so barren, and wasteful~
that indignant justice, has become so paceful~
familys have seen the moronic coddiling,( babyish)~
they let them run around so condescending~
remnats, have all been lost, hopes been broken~
babys lifes have been born, but now they chokin~
lurkin thoughts on how evil fills this world~
but it concentrats on all the sins it wurls~
the world imperious, so it should break down~
let the peace go on forever, round and round~

this is only some of my work

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i think ya piece gettin slept on cuz you tryin to impress cats wit that dictionary sittin by ya side....the words you used in this piece...mad NO sense in what you was tryin to convey...man!

jauntily means

Having a buoyant or self-confident air; brisk.
Crisp and dapper in appearance; natty.

when you put in context to what you was writtin...you made NO SENSE...fa real...dont try so hard wit the vocab,..u still got more words in here im not gonna bust you out on...nah mean...elevate yaself

holla

one...hunnet