SICK RAP, please give me feedback
 

Hi all. This is the very first rap i've ever recorded. Please rate it, and go soft on me :)

Thanks!


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/n...imetermusic.htm

yeh dis woz coo, ur word play woz good but u need to spit ur words clearer sum lines are clear but otha's are mumble. u sound olda den wot u r. im thinkin of recordin, wot i need? keep it up 9 jus pratice on ur spittin tho. peace
~roX~ p.s were bout in tha u.k u at?

thanks for the reply, hopefully I get more of um'. I will work on my spittin, i have only been practicing on that rap for a few minites before it was recorded so I might re-record it again.

How did you make it!!!Amtry'n to make one and cant get it!!