Content Has Issues
 

~Talkin~
I Usually Think About Paper Chasin
Being An Emcee Until Im Old And
Grey But Wearin A White Coat As
A Therapist Will Probaly Get Me Paid
There Are Many Points In Time That
I Could Have Probaly Used A Lifelne
When I Was Too Tired Or Out Of It
Merely Not Stated In Tha Right Mind

I Tired Of Waitin For Tha Bus Or
TakinShotgun In A Ride Thinkin
Even Though Things Arent Perfect
Merely Take It In Stride No More
Night For Now Drunk Or High
But I Know That I Can Go On Tryin
My Best At Tha Least And Im Sick
Of Muthafuckas Sayin Im Too Abstract
Or Too Deep Yes Yes Im Alost Deep In
Debt Deep Depressed Far Off That Cliff
Without A Bungee Supposively Relationships
Do Tend To Work Out When Theyre Front Free
So Fuck A Metaphor My Head Is Sore I Say
Exactly What I Believe Thinkin About My Girl
Time To Time Wait For Tha Morning Dont Sleep
For Some Reason Shed Still Love This Almost
Broke Emcee With Her In An Apartment When
She Could Really Go On Out Get Anything That
She Wanted Thank God That I Found Myself
With Her I Was Lost In Tha Music Confusion
Theres A Lot To Teach A Lot To Learn Im Not
Concerned Wih Being Blunted Till A Hundred
Drinkin A Life Away Until Its Over Done With
Dumb Shit We Have Some Lives Ta Live

yea you do got issues homie..lol...im not gonna bust ya out like that though...man...ya pieces structure was wierd...somma ya flow scheme was hard to keep a hold of..because it would change everywhich way...nah mean...n somma ya words made it harder to read...cuz they were connected to other words...

the beginnin stanza was coo..the whole idea bout the bus thinggy was a nice approach to convey what you was startin out wit in ya piece...

it was aiight...keep elevatin...n plan ya ish homie

holla

one...hunnet

i was fuccin around hunnet..look at somethin else

ok newb