Battle vs Dariel Shariem
 

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uppin fo feedback....

Uppin fo some feedback

You need to text battle for a few more years. At least until your voice drops an octive or two. Also, your flow was forced at times. That's all.

^^^agreed...jus need a few years of improvement...only time can help u there...try to take more time writing the beat...ur bars where hella rushed...keep at it...peace

i love the beat! pretty good punch lines but they weren't the BEST. I think the other people were just hating, because you were on beat and it didn't seem rushed (rapping) but i know it sounds like it because of the voice overs......chill out on the voice overs and fades so we can hear what you are saying. holla at me if you tryin to do a collabo......beat provided by you