"enigmatic"
 

Im enigmatic, question-addict, mix-fact-static-with-sporatic/
thoughts and lies, I caterize/
rhymes in half and laugh as I murder this batch of raps/
faster then attacks from cats that shoot off gats at laxed tax/ payers, call me the mayor, Im more burnt out then the holes in the ozone layer/
lightsabre, my pen glows with flavor/
lyrical raper, cant save this paper/
when I go nuts and attach my nuts to my face with a stapler/ then try to fly like the caped crusader/
malevolent, parasitic, crotch crickets/
burn my dick as I try to earn my shit/
feel what I kick/
when challenged, I cower in fear/
cuz Ive only battled the mirror/
and Im o and 1500/
thats it, Im done with/
Im bullshit/
no q's and supposedly Im enigmatic?

I like yhat shit. nice vocab and wordplay. keep postin

c'mon send me some critique
positive or negative

i liked it this line..

keep rhymin...

yo, shit was fuckin' ill... I was feelin' it through-out.. multis were some of the best I've seen here.. you had a topic.. kinda.. it flowed for the most part all the way, uppin' this shit..

.Responding.
 

Man... who the fuck are you? Another dick ryder, tryin' to start some shit to make a name for yourself. Son, don't write a check you can't cash. You don't know the game dunny.

shut up bitch.. it's jus a rhyme, the title happened to be your name...

.Damn.
 

So i'm a bitch now... just wait.

hahahaha... just wait.. like that's supposed to be threatning or somethin'... I don't give a fuck about you...

.Bitch Nigga.
 

Nah kid... I ain't say it's a threat. I just said wait... see the shit I got for you son.

I thought it was pretty tight too just that you need to gather your thoughts more and not have such random thoughts thrown around in there... lol... I can't say you didn't stay on topic b/c I didn't know what the topic really was besides "enigmatic" so keep spittin... Good drop

pz