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pls pls get at me wit criticisms, thoughts, developments woteva
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fuckin aye yardie
your bloody stlye is off the shish-ka-bob
but the bloody beat sucked

cmon ppl u peepin dis thread and joint, hola at me wit feedbak how r ne of us gonna improve if no one tells us where we are going wrong...
cmon!

Aiight i'll keep it real,

The beat itself just sounds a bit cheap that's all, It's like unprofessional, And it sounds almost like a rock beat, This is rap dog lol, It sounds video game quality, Like atari shit,

You yourself aren't bad, Always coo to hear a different style of rapping, Just this beat man, it's taking you down, I know a few places you can snatch some ill beats from , Anything yo,

I will give you props on staying on beat on this damn instrumental, Shit seems impossible lmao,

Overall, need a new beat, px.

Also, peep out "im a lowlife" new track from me. show love back.