"Voice"(Good spit, worth a look)
 

Hey yo...
Apparently my last spit wasn't good enough for ya,
Don't worry, you have no clue when I'm 'bout to show ya.
Cuz I'm sick of this fucking world,
Like some damn turtle stuck in his shell.
Well now's the time I come out,
Be rid of this fucking hell.
I got so much shit to tell,
You'll be begging them to ring the bell.
This white man CAN jump,
better than yo tirejack can pump.
So go sit on that stump,
I see that throat; there's a fuckin lump.
Yo don't know how to react to me,
like lightning hittin a tree,
you felt me coming but were unable to see.
That it's me, the very symbol of authenticity,
This game's jus one more trophy to me.
Shit, the violence in this world is deep,
like some pool, your breath you jus cannot keep.
Like a mountain sometime's it's jus too damn steep.
My time's up, I hope ya felt my beat,
This is a jus a taste of me, all you others can go take a fucking seat.

yo dog,
this was tight...i liked these lines best:

Well now's the time I come out,
Be rid of this fucking hell.
I got so much shit to tell,
You'll be begging them to ring the bell.
This white man CAN jump,
better than yo tirejack can pump.

that was aiight...keep writing,

Peace.

yo thanx man, appreciate all the comments, like to see u gettin some more rhymes out so i can critique u too heh

that wasnt too bad man. youre gonna get better but that was pretty tight.

that wuz alright do yo damn thang