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Low Key 03-18-03 09:58 PM

Chrome Microphone
 
Chrome Microphone

They grab my throat, spit on me and yell in my face
i'm the most wanted by every emcee in the place
sun down is the time when i'm really in my prime
rappers battle over me, i listen to all of their rhymes
some cats try to choke me, others tell me jokes
other times i'm blessed by the smell of weed smoke
i'm the most respected, most envied, most loved
they tell me stories, and speak to me from above
by day i'm left alone in the dark no body visits me
but i'm never lonely, coz i know everyone misses me
street kids and gangstas want to get their hands on me
the most intelligent work intricate plans for me
i make noise and sound best when held by the realest
i know when it's real coz i'm energized when i feel it
my head is a grill, my body's made out of steel,
i've helped mad heads in the industry get a deal
i'm humble by nature, but always in the limelight
spent time on demo's helpin rappers get they rhymes tight
i've been in basements, clubs and travelled world wide
centre of attention in cyphers i get the crowd hype
i always survive, it's my job to keep the party live
like every emcee i live and breathe for the rhyme
becoz of me i seen the two hottest take shots to the dome
it's a way of life livin as the chrome microphone...

Katastrafy 03-18-03 10:03 PM

Killed that topic fam. nice word-play.creative as fuck. keep postin

inspire 03-19-03 12:18 AM

now that was just indescribable.... dope... keep rhymin

Alias-C 03-19-03 12:13 PM

ooooooooo! this shit was tight man, no doubt, another metamorphesis type piece... I liked it, shit was short but almost everything for this topic was covered in summery... nice wordplay man, and decent flow... keep that shit coming kid... one
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Enigmatic 03-19-03 01:18 PM

.Them Other Cats.
 
Like them other cats said... it was hot. All I gotta say...

12cent hooligan 03-19-03 01:39 PM

ya it was g
I feel u took this topic to a whole new level

HarryHodean 04-17-03 08:19 PM

yo shits hot homie keep flowing dont give up one

Orikle 04-17-03 09:05 PM

haha, DOPE, DOPE, DOPE, Way to rep K.I man, fucken creative as dogg, wordplay and ideas were ill...

Peace Out Yo!!!!

server 04-17-03 09:14 PM

one word: elementary
doesn't that piss you off?

unifire 04-17-03 10:40 PM

man Low Key i haven't seen much of yo shit, but that piece was NICE, the whole thing from start to finish made that complete !
and yo wats this fag server goin on about, server u couldn't dream of posting something, nearly half as good as this.. u got an issue with it? i think we can settle this in front lines... if u wish?

Atetrack define' 04-18-03 01:57 AM

wasa tight drop right here cat.these cats is right shits hot...keep spittin .
bismillah

Kapone 04-18-03 04:03 AM

due, i str8 loved this ryhme, i know u may have posted for feed back, not to hear how much everyone loved it so ill critisize, fuck server, hes tryin to get a rise

felt tha the 3rd transition of the ryhme:

centre of attention in cyphers i get the crowd hype
i always survive, it's my job to keep the party live
like every emcee i live and breathe for the rhyme

fell of a bit but needless, good ryhme

RythmicTendicies 04-18-03 05:18 AM

dope, ill', tight! must i go on!

tRiLL 06-02-03 09:15 AM

by day i'm left alone in the dark no body visits me
but i'm never lonely, coz i know everyone misses me//haha dopeness

hands on me
the most intelligent work intricate plans for me//sick vocab and wordplay right there

like every emcee i live and breathe for the rhyme///tru tru tru tru tru


dope piece

Orikle 06-03-03 06:37 AM

^^Sticky Destined haha or Legends...I reckon this is soooo dope hahah....


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