gettin stepped on- post me up dogg i need the input
 

check this,
when i speak you listen ya hear me foo,
i look at your face and looks like a second grader drew you,
well poo poo you live in trailer and what u gonna do,
you try and step up to me and u get shoved back down,
now you just actin like a clown,
i'll swipe your face and give you a frown,
then i'll take you to town and show you where you belong,
next thing you get faggot is a swipe on the face with my slong,
while i'll be hittin my bong and liting that shit up you'll be sucking,
upchukin is what you betta not do you'll swollow all lthat shit up,
if you dont i shove it up your butt,
next ill get that slut girlfriend of yours and show her how u look now,
and that will get that smeirk off your face cause thats what happens when you step up to 2jew4.

yo replie to this shit it has been awhile since ive done this
thanks

while i'll be hittin my bong and liting that shit up you'll be sucking,
upchukin is what you betta not do you'll swollow all lthat shit up,
if you dont i shove it up your butt,

this shit sound gay dog...

put some more thought into your rhymes yo...

LMAO 2jew4u is back!!!

remeber your ass on this site like a year ago

your still whack!!

shit sounds a little to gay...and theres absoloutly no flow to this

elemntary my dear jew its too elementary

This shit far from kosher, brotha Wackstein.
Pretty broken flow. Lots of homoeroticism.
Cmon now, do you really want to put a dick in the butt?

"i'll swipe your face and give you a frown,"

WACK! Underground Kid...

Sorry, you'll proably want to "swipe my face" now.

This is why you get stepped on, dogg.

Even up your bars, find flow, save the contrived fire for battles, don't threaten someone by revealing your homosexuality. And if you have a wack-name; don't include it in verse.

Agree wit the rest just flat out gay shit right there. keep practicin. It'll pay off