Tact vs. F_M_C
 

Alright,
lets do 16 bars (one line=one bar)
I don't know how this voting system works, but It looks like whoever gets the most in 3 days? This cool with you respond...then will hit it up

i'm down post up

flow master screw must have lost a nut/
battlin me kid? you must be nuts/
fuck, I'm the master here/
fear, every word that i deliver/
u quiver, at the very sound of my voice/
choice i leave u w/ none but to run/
come, to this board you get wiped like ass/
I laugh, when I see your name/
lame, correct, you game? thats check/
teach u to respect, every word I speak/
you weak, you don't compare to my talent/
I spit the real, u spit the fallace/
my lyrics crush u like a mallot/
you ain't got no talent, you just actor/
I'm so active I have u stuck in a nuclear reactor/
your done bitch, turn to the next chapter/

u up

fool you obveuosly have got no game//
silly punches and kicks canstantly popin off real lame//
don't ever try to main tane my abnormal brian//
i'll deterate your flesh like acid rain//
you are straight up wacker than emcee hamer //
coming straight out of the suburbs of alabama//
going on tour with your mamah//
i'm sic and twisted like jeferry domer//
fuck around clown and your gay ass shall become a gonner//
i'll blow your ass up like the uni-bomber//
deflect your armor and endure to harm yah//

Unofficial Vote = Tact
 

Hold on: FMC, aren't you the Christian Hip Hop Master?
Don't you think you've taken away from your credibility? You're sick and twisted like Dahmer? Bullshit. Are you a Christian like DMX?

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FMC:

I wasn't really feeling your verse. Weak punches (and kicks) that make people snicker rather than "OHH!".

i'll deterate your flesh like acid rain//

When the hell has acid rain really deteriarated someone's flesh? Ugh... You might as well say: "I'll cut you like a spoon"

Spelling words like "mane tane" "emcee hamer" domer, obveously, canstantly... It pisses me off. When you spell the words like that, and I'm reading it, it fucks me up when I try to pick up your flow because I run across brand new words!
deflect your armor? What???
Suburbs of Alabama? Where? Why not New Hampshire?...
Wack.
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Tact:

teach u to respect, every word I speak/
you weak, you don't compare to my talent/
I spit the real, u spit the fallace/
my lyrics crush u like a mallot/
you ain't got no talent, you just actor/

This was the best part of the battle. You have a weird flow... hard to pick up. Your links come end/front of bars like we're running a multi. I don't see that around here...
You didn't win this with flow... I would suggest thinking about your style. You had hits that actually meant something, besides wackness. I think the originality of your style compelled me to vote your way, rather than the sea of sameness FMC swims in.
Some glimmer.
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Keep working guys.

Unofficial Vote=Tact

vote goes to FMC... both verses were kinda weak, his actually had some punches and such...

Yo, blunt. You need to poll vote. And if you're not registered, you should get so adorned. Despite my disagreement with your vote...

yo Shabaz, that structure I used I don't use all the time, looking at it, I don't even know why I did, the begeinning of each line can just be placed at the end of the previous one. hmmm......

F_M_C the battle was mos def weak...tact...you gotta clean ya act man....you need to work on ya structure n scheme bad...its like you didnt even attach F_M_C....fmc came nice wit the punches n kept me readin it...he had feelin through his verse n kept it alive...good finish and an endin

prps to both....

f_m_c gets my poll vote

It should also be agreed that he didn't meet the line requirement, altoguh i don't mind, it mgiht affect ya voting. uppin

wasup you all just checking in to see the out come peace

uppin 4 da fuck of it

uppin 4 closure