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Supernatural...
First post yall, nice an short so yall cant complain bout' reading the newbies long piece lol
I am the one they call The Original Supernatural// Showing "rappers" of fiction that im all factual// I defeat cats with ease like im using lyrical wizardry// Sneaking up on fools with pure perfected sorcery// I rain true with preposterous cruelty and evil terror// Think you clever, well say hello to my trial and error// I mix-and-blend, a dangerous opponent, I set-trends// I wipe out all challengers so please "phone a friend"// You and your 'dog' versus the "fire heater for hire"// Words so hot even my tongues starting to perspire// Scribed in flames I show you true fully formed detail// My heat intensity grows, you a turtle hiding in your shell// I cut clean your 'dogs' tail without fail I always prevail// How’s that for lyrical "DE-TAIL"// Peace fam' |
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that was cool... that was good for a first post... keep rhymin |
This was aight...needs some elevation, but that will be found in time...keep spittin shit...not bad..
P.e.a.c.e. |
that shit was pretty hott.....keep spittin rhymes.....O~N~E
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not bad. you deffintly sould stick around and elevate, u got a solid talent. stay up and return the favor.
peace |
I cut clean your 'dogs' tail without fail I always prevail//
How’s that for lyrical "DE-TAIL"// Creative...Elevation's a step beyond Evasive. Keep on keepin' on. |
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