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jotoy 03-19-03 05:12 PM

heartbroken
 
you were the first one i trusted
when i had no one to turn to
i didn't ask for another friend
but then came you
i can't believe you have the nerve to talk about me
you remind me of a storm because you destroy everything in your path
including me
first comes your lightening, which wasn't that bad
but then comes that rain of yours, which makes me mad
you didn't stop there...
you destroyed my heart

happy to find out i was heartbroken when you left
everytime i saw you i wanted to know what you thought of me
were you as annoyed with me as i with you
could i still call when i needed to
i lost what i thought was a close friend
i can't trust you anymore
i can't call you just like any other friend...

which is why i'm, heartbroken

joi

Madd Preacher 03-19-03 05:55 PM

it must be because im lazy that im not commin through on the replies...but this was coo...the theme is played...vocab was coo...keep elevatin son

holla

one...hunnet

Phantasia 03-20-03 06:21 PM

What tha Hell? Who was that about? I'm confused

jotoy 03-23-03 04:55 PM

it's not made to a particular person girl...but reading that last thread i made, i might have to change my screen name. (l.o.l.)


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