My first time
 

Yo check it....

This is my first time rappin//
take this time to see what happins//
hope I do good//
and get a good review//
i heard this s* is harsh on the new//
take this time for you to hear my s*//
god I hope I don't embarrasse me on this//
it's hard to come up with rhymes to pleasure the living//
hope you like what'cha hearing//
my words has these feeling//
when you sitting here reading//
HA b* my words are conceiving//
i'm about to give up ya'll and leaving ya'll with the suspense of my next song//
OH MY F*N GOD what am i doing//
this song f*n sucked i need improving//

peace

um....rap about something....yo nigga. you just insulted urself alot. it wouldnt have been so bad if you rapped about ANYTHING. practice.

whats with the not swearing/swearing thing
if u aint gonna swear then dont if u are then write the word
that was iight for the first time though
keep droppin and try usin multis
peace

yeah i agree dog,
if you really want to rap - p-r-a-c-t-i-c-e....
stay up though.

peace.

Thanks dogg.. I will P-R-A-C-T-I-C-E.. if you have any tips for me to improve I will greatly appreciate it.