WUT Can I SAy?....IT's m off tha Top...PEEP..
 

I'm frustrated pissed and stressed/
Clutching diss port a foot on tha block
but ma shoulder's cold/
no whip A Forces Gotta Re-up and it
Ain't walking Distance/
Barely flip a dime ta 2 nics deez nigga's hatin/
keep a socket on dem dark blue fords
i kno they watching.....hahaha


All niggas talk about iz how all i talk about iz shit they think i'm jus talkin bout/
But i talk about shit dat i'm About they don't kno wut i'm talkin BouT/
I'm quit ta shut ya mouth,shut ya mouth Talks cheap But i'm broke so wuts tha fuss aBouT/
high school drop out like fuck dat,Hop scoth school girl Shells get left were ya pump's At!!!!/
I'm from where you could punk'd and jacked, D-Bowed Shoes snatch/
Tied in Knots and Thrown up Chillen Where Dem Pigeons Be Shittin AT/

i kno its short i'm add too diss muh-fucka later......i'm gones....haha

uppin

high school drop out like fuck dat,Hop scoth school girl Shells get left were ya pump's At!!!!/

Look at you with your hot multi rhyme line bro!
Honestly, that's the best technical lyrical skill I've seen out of you.
So, that's good. You know I'm not going to LIKE the piece, but I wanted to give you props for that. Keep it up.

i"m late as shit.......haha.....Werd thanks yo...

I rob niggas like kazaa,wanna-be bad boys Want tha Shyne But like Miami i Got em Locked-up/
Ma Styles generic like cold whip Underground like Ya Sewer System/
Doubt tha spits you got it coming like Iraqi Villages wit mustard Gases/

niggas all bluff bout shit like sadaam knowing they ain't got it/
Fo making me think it I Play bush and Go ta War wit em fo tha fuck of iT/
I'm kamakazi Worse than ya idolized thug image You get choked like b.Rabbit 30 Deep in ya Own Territory/
can you picture iT?picture did it ya para-Tents looking at homicide/
Pictures of yesterday's present You Choked ta Death not even lookin Dead layin in ya roca-wear/
haha....
I'm dat Youngin dat wuz up past his Bed-time on tha Back Porch dat got passed tha 40/
I'm gangsta!! to tha Bone middles spitting deez riddles keep a nigga from Snaping aT Any giving MomenT/

Yall Want more?......................

don't sleep........

uppin.........

I SEE u got some Unique style......Nice na'mean

ps: peep my shit Dedication to MOTherland

i'ma do dat dat homie

Fuck it I'll jus drop sum mo till muh-fuckas Reply

i didnt liek the first one it was to elementry.





those aint multis multi doesnt mean rhyming more then one word in a line, multi is multi syallable rhymes

the second one was alot better

"I rob niggas like kazaa,wanna-be bad boys Want tha Shyne But like Miami i Got em Locked-up/"

this line had a nice concept but it didnt flow that good

'niggas all bluff bout shit like sadaam knowing they ain't got it/
Fo making me think it I Play bush and Go ta War wit em fo tha fuck of iT/
"

this was a ok bar, just dont like all the wit fo ta tha bull shit, if it wasnt full of that it would be better.

check out mine "one of my verses"

yea....uh-huh.........