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ORIEN 03-20-03 10:16 AM

Fuck Friends
 
This damn computer is pissing me off
evey day it's one thing or the other
either it's slow, loses connection
or it freezes - i get caught and sent to the office
fuck it
ain't that annoying?
it makes you feel like you just wanna destroy it.

but something else been trying my patience
i'm glad the computer froze - good
i'll use the frustration

Don't you hate phonie niggaz
who pretend to b close
and when shit goes down
they dissappear like ghosts

For real, dude if you listening
don't you see you're more pussy whipped
than abused kittens?

Now you're there talking shit
jus' you get sex from that project bitch
don't make you special
any dog can get it

Who knows what that hoes got
she screwed me, my neighbor
and moving down the whole block

It's a'right i ain't mad at ya playa
jesus christ saved lives
and even he had a betrayor

I could sit back and patiently
wait for you find out for yourself
but a can't see you go out like that
you been my best friend

for six years
and if a gotto use fists to settle this
i'll turn you into colours they ain't even invented yet
maybe then you'll come to your senses

She ain't wifey material
she's juat a sly slut
she get passed around
more than the cold virus

I ain't go say yo name
you know who you are
if you got something to say
well i'll see you tomorrow

inspire 03-20-03 11:58 PM

mmmm this was aiiight... but after reading it a few times it doesnt really seem to flow all that much to me... maybe its your layout... can see some rhyming buts its few and far between... work on it... keep rhymin

Tha Linez Drawn 03-21-03 12:10 AM

Don't you hate phonie niggaz
who pretend to b close
and when shit goes down
they dissappear like ghosts

Aiiight, now that's what I'm talkin about. Open some heads up in here. Real creative...if it was put to music, heads wouldn't hate it.
Keep on.


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