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Felon~E v.s. V919V
10-16 lines
5-0 = Win 3-0 = KO U spit first no crew no hate no d.r no recycle no biting ur verse iz due 1 day afta u chek in iight , ima chek in wen u put ya verse |
ok then
ey yo// hey,gimpy felon~e,why are ya' jumpy?// i think it's cuz' you see that i'm da' better emcee// ya' better get back to ya' work,where you never will be promoted// but,hey,as a gay porn star there isn't much chance to be noted// look at ya' fuckin' pic,if i'm right it's wolverine// that's the stupidest thing i've ever seen// kid,i don't know how old you are,maybe a small teen// c'mon,you can reveal it,you're a 12 year old bitch with name christine// i'll kill every protein of you,it's just routine// doesn't matter if blade or gun// killin' you is easy but fun and it didn't even have begun// you take ya' popgun and i my shotgun// haha,now lets see who's gonna run,my rhymes are hotter than da' sun// against me you got no rhymes,you'll start to stutter and hung// oh yeah bitch,i'm done,have killed another one// 15 lines,your turn! |
dats it iight lets go
~1~ima burn ya ass like a bitch wit a dirty clit ~2~ya mom burn me dats y i only fuk her b-tween her tits ~3~i cant talk bout ur mom if i'll kill u 4 talkin bout mine ~4~juz tell her da next time i com 2 fuk ,2 let me skip da line ~5~im sumthin dat will kill u, u superman im Cryptanite ~6~keep fuckin wit me n' u'll b sleepin in a CRYpt tonite ~7~u like a god, da wackness emergency Center iz ur Temple ~8~my gun's names iz Oxy pad cuz i'tll pop u n' ya pimples ~9~u 1 of dem niggas dat go 2 jail juz 2 get raped ~10~nah u one of dem gurls dat fuk R.Kelly juz 2 get taped ~11~if u eva n a concert, niggas gonna say BOO da hoar ~12~out of my 9 hoes ya mom iz numba 2 or 4 ~13~im blak n fom da projects may b u can learn from me ~14~cuz theres no such thing as a rapper from hamburg Germany ~15~ now that im done u my bitch i got u on smash ~16~ima call u world trade center cuz deres nuthin left but ya ash HOLLA BAQ J.R |
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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nice spit dawg!
c'mon people,vote! |
c'mon people,plz vote!
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^^ uppin
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yo v u need some work son, u need ta like really find urself!
cuz felony had u da whole time cat. betta flow, but felony ur momma janks was played. so keep that in mind! noth'n but constructive critasizm and i can't spell! my vote=felony |
thx 4 vote!
need more! |
^^uppin -.-
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felony was way more creative with his verse.
V try using better punches... vote:felony |
felone=winner
better all around that opther cat needs some serious work if he wants to win some battles |
im goin with felon-e- on this 1
better punches, better flow. v that was a sound attempt. 4 a german u write pretty gud english, keep it goin v=felon-e- |
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