what about me
 

i just posted my first pots and here it is

dressed my self up in a suit and tie//
fuck weapons.walked straraight up to the gaurd and put my finger in his eye
told the fag ta fill up the fuckin bag//
bucket fulla bills ima get some pills fuckit i getcha all high

is it any good, or decent even

its was in robbing a bank in 4 lines

its wasnt all that good, im sayin i couldnt get into it. it was to short.
try slowin down take some time and write a lil longer next time and its the last bar didnt even go with the first 3
keep practicine and read what other catz on here write
dont streal their style or rhymes but use their styles to develop your own.
keep droppin youll get better and try battlin too if u havent already ull see a style u might wanna try idk
juss my opinion good luck dawg
keep spittten