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KRISSKASS 03-21-03 02:19 AM

The Gravaton
 
" yess , yess, The Gravaton, i said da Tha Gravaton//

-Its all gone; blasted, nuke bombs, combined neotrons //

- Food and shelters give hope to children and moms//

- men have to struggle, diggin beneath their own rubble//

- burst tha bubble, ozone lair uncovered, deep slumber//

- Mankind played to much and crashed bumper ta bumper//

- Forget ya gay lovers, too late to put rubbers//

- The Gravaton has begun.......

-what have we become, a lifeless form of scum//

-i'm trying to jump, but i aways get held down to subcumb//

- The Gravaton.....

- Goose bumps run underneath my skin and gums//

- everytime i glimpse at this immense captivizing pressence/

-no specified defenition, caught in suspended animation//

-only way out is to fight da force like luke and his light sword/

-pull back, from gettin slapped by a pimp in a cadillac//

-this world now is pitch black from all tha radioactive attacks/

-showdown in little kyoto, noses growin like pinnochio's//

-lying money hungry tycoons wash away ideas like typhoons/

-The gravaton is here to bring us doom//

-Pulling every mass to its core, rich, middle, or poor//

- everyone is gonna feel this rath like a bloody bath//

-splashed, as you gasp for air; run like mcnair//

-Through da force of a da gravoton's lair//

-right now people dont care about their worst fear//

-comin real and uncut, The gravaton onslaught//

-force of destruction, unstopable juggernaut//

-This is one battle da u.s cant stop//

just wait when da poles drop//

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inspire 03-21-03 05:03 AM

ok for real... reply to other peoples stuff... i see like 7 of your drops on the front page right now... you might think it increases your chances of getting a reply but it doesnt... gotta reply to someone elses work... anyways this was like 10 times better than the last one of yours i peeped... work on your consistency... and keep the cream of the crop and post them... not every single rhyme you've ever written.... keep rhymin


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