ill mental vs. harmony =dont sleep=
 

post up u first
10 bars-30 barsjus incase ya wanna go long

how about you go first so i can see what to do

aight here goes
ill mental u a light weight bitch/
like a full grown man wit a fukin baby dick/
look u said u like my fukin punch lines/
how u like havin dem shot at u wit a glock nine?/
i don't really think u understand the concept of battlin/
it's not about tryin ta travel up a dry creek by paddlin/
ima take it kinda easy on ya since ur a newb/
but it's copmletely rude showin pics of yo girl nude/
o wait u thought that would earn u sum respect/
well look where it got ya now yo ass is in chin check/
snap yo neck break ya arm crack yo skull/
i bet yo next verse compared ta dis 'll sound dull/
if u grab a title don't expect ta hold it/
it will fall behind ya otha life ya fukin alchoholic/
i bet u suck mo dick den u drink beer's/
ur parents were prolly suprised that yo first word was cheers/
fuk it ull neva exceed dis ryhme i built/
admit it nigga ya jus got killt/

ok fine\
i'll go then\
while im flowin here\
you got yo pen\
writin yo shit\
so you can rememba\
but it gon be hard\
to write dismembad\
i cut yo head off\
put it in yo moms bead\
harmony\
yo status is dead\
my rhymes may be short\
but they ova ya head\
ima keep this short\
so i can see what you do\
when i say ima win\
my words all be true

my vottte goes to harmony, his verse was by far more superior.

he copies half his verses from eminem tho, and is this only a one flow battle? i thought we would go like at least 2?

dis shit was wack and i really refuse ta vote//
cuz when it comes ta rhymes, both ya'll cats is some fuckin jokes//

naw man and what ya mean i copied eminem thats my sig

dude that whole creek line was from eminem

from what? well dawg if it was i didn't know

how about we go one more round?

Harmony you won dis one. Da whole Eminem thing sounds kinda true.

Ill Mental gotta let it roll more. Nice shit though

this shit aint over\
we still goin another round\
harmony you a buster\
stay here and get clowned\
i'll cut yo ass up\
and sell you by the pound\
we'll smell you around town\
cause the stench of crap\
is hard to not notice\
when i hear you rap\
gay men dont battle\
so just stop tryin\
fore i stomp you too hard\
and you start cryin\
i know all the gay jokes\
im sure you do too\
cause you a gay activist\
you and your whole crew\
i got nothin against gays\
except one thing\
they suck dick\
and doin that act you are the king

look if u wanna get killed again come on and get it/
u ain't no fukin rapper u a fukin critic/

bak to da top don't sleep oh
and plz some registered voters plz view dis
i do appreciate the comments but wit tha new system i need soe votes