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Who Is God...?
Who Is God I Ask, To Those Who Get Fucked And Trashed,
Stuck In the Clash, Of Gods Almighty War Against Satan, I Cringe While Im Waitin, For The Answer Of Serenity, While The Cancer Burns Within Me, And Satans Grip Holds Tight, You Makin Mistakes That I Might, The Holy Wrath Burns Bright, Symbols To Indepth To De-Code, Many Have Wept On The Road, Between Heaven And Hell, Children Die Everyday Between 7 and 12, I'll Level The Bell, In A Futile Attempt To Restore Heaven Itself, But Is That Really What I Want, Is That Even The Truth, Or Was Jesus Just A Tool Of Satan, Ensuring We'd All Be Moved, I Crawl When Im Soothed, By The Sweet Voice Of A Siren, I'm Poised Towards The Cryin, Of The Innocent And Guilty, Its Only Punishment For The Fealty, Those Who Swore Allegiance, To God And His Preachin, Dont Talk While Im Speakin, I Never Swore Allegiance To God, The Vile Are Sneakin, So Why Should I Base My Life Under His Rules, I'll Plunder His Pools, And Run Asunder These Fools, That Follow Him As If He Were Not Cruel... What Are You Thinkin About...? |
are u dissin god or just wondering about life, nice flow anyway
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Not all that great...rhyme scheme was very off balance...flow was straight though...
Keep at it... P.e.a.c.e. |
not dissin god...
and my rhyme scheme...? whats wrong with it...? |
maN I THINK it wus good namean but sounds like u dissin god ....anywayz keep writing
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I love relgious peices.. (tha name should give it away) Nice work fo real. OoNnEe Luh
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