Quik-$pit V's ScarFaceKapone
 

Aight Normal Rules
:20 lines MAX
:3 - 0 KO
:I'll Spit First
:No Dyckrydin' Votes

Pz Good Luck Scarface

aight man u got 10 minutes from my reply time

ur 10 minutes late man
but its cool

man r u ready i gotta go to werk

Aight I'm a break up your name, put in to boxes and send it home//
SCAR: is wot i'll leave across your forehead with a broken bone//
Face: you'll be facin' a bullet speedin at ya wrapped in chrome//
Kapone: aint on tha throne its just me sitting here alone//
Now you've been broken down i'll spit some shit in your direction//
your about to be injected with tha most deadly verbal injection//
you'll be infected with a special, silent chokin infection//
which is enough to give me all the votes on this election//
I must state one very simple and cunning correction//
that scarfacekapone have never pleased a women with his erection//
they just come to me for tha inner pussie inspection//
I know its hard for you and you can't accept rejection//
But thats one of lifes realitys and you have no protection//
I can spit rhymes all day with severe devastation//
thats another reality in which you have no protection//
and there isn't no cure for this deadly verbal infection//
me and your bitch have a good sexual connection//
as she's rydin my di*k with a sweaty burned out complextion//
Your bitch is fukin ugly, but i dont care i'll fuk any pussie, //
she's been fuked a bit, she's all rusty, but wot tha fuk i aint fussy...


Pz drop ya verse as fast as you can

here dog ima spot you some paper and a pen
so you can go back and write another spit
hey man listen up, your vocab is weak
ur gunna be 80 and still wont hit a sexual peak
but man listen to me when i speak
and close that mouth cuz yo shit reaks
but youd better check yourself be4 you lose some teeth
it'd be a favor cuz when ur suckin dick then u could breathe
cuz man ill leave you in peices like this mic
and give your ass to your boyfreind so he can kiss that shit at night
beat me? haha you have a better chance of goin str8
cuz ill give you more stitches then lill bowwow when he got raped
yea man ur a "g" with an a and a y
wanna see how quik spit died?
he fucked with kapone and got his house blown sky high
man do u gottanother rhyme done yet
you werked on this verse all night i bet
and got it dissed cuz mine was just plain better
ill even leave you in a lake to get ur panties wetter

damn u had flow your punches need werk you had this one which made me laff: I must state one very simple and cunning correction//
that scarfacekapone have never pleased a women with his erection haha thats skill to use man good battle

aight Uppin on votes

Pz .::1::.

man see? we aint hostile we still got luv this is what battlin should be about know what im sayin, what did u think of my verse?

Its cool man, sorry i never droped mine sooner, i was watchin Iraq gettin bombed...
Wot u think of mine?
Pz

like i said man on this site they care more for the punches then the flow, but flow is important too, your flow was off the hook it didnt change the whole verse but there was only like 1 1/2 punches there

this was really a good battle one of the best i've seen since i came back to the site anyway my breakdown is

punches- kapone
flow- quick
volcab- kapone
word play- niether

vote kapone

Both verses were all right. I figured I would like Spit's better, but the beauty's skin deep.

Spit:
I didn't feel punches, it took a lot of space but didn't bring sufficient content.
Good Lines:
I must state one very simple and cunning correction//
that scarfacekapone have never pleased a women with his erection//
they just come to me for tha inner pussie inspection//

But, don't tell me about deadly verbal injections and infections more than once. And your ending was extremely weak. Don't talk about fucking ugly broads in a diss... that's ridiculous.
As stated by your opponent, no less, you do have great flow. You need to up your battle-specific skills. Try to find a personal, give harder punches, and not ones that can be generalized hopefully.

Kapone:
Punches hit harder. You alluded to HIS vocab, but you better check your own house. Vocab isn't the be all, end all. But don't point it out if you're not solid. Your flow was NOT near Spit's. I thought the whole second half of your verse was solid. You started out a touch too conversational, that's kind of a waste in text, I think. But it was a fairly consistent verse, it got at him like a battle verse should, where Spit's was more of an exhibit of talent. Just check the closes, you got him...

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This wasn't WACK for a newbie battle, but there's work to be done. Two different styles for sure! I'll check you out later.
Peace.

Unofficial Vote = ScarFaceKapone

aight its cool this is only a friendly battle anyway
1 - 0 kapone

yo i at first lookin at scarface rhymes of thought it was basic, complexity has to go to QUil spit...but the flow of scarefaces i much prefered...i myself write rhymes too fukkin long and the level i wanted them at is what scarface has done....

i liked he the stuff Quil did at the start...rippin apart ya name....

but my votes is KAPONE

peace