Don't Try
 

I be the lyrical poltergeist when it comes to females//
My rhymes come quick like a 1minute man who can't prevail//
Oh my,
you betta not try,
cuz I'll crush ya rookie,
like cookie monster loving his cookies//
Stomp on ya then laugh in you face//
Make ya mo'embarrassed than the Clinton case//
I'm known for blowin' up spots so if you gots issues,
betta keep em' covered//
Cuz if I find out, I'll dig em' up and report em' live like most wanted on discovered//
I'm quick and fast so you'll neva catch up to me//
You stay 10 levels down and you're still trying to be me?//
Nigga.........
When I spit cover ya eyes cuz they might get blurry//
Come'in in slide'in as if my words are so slurry//
Keep ya filled wit chills as if ya was holdin' a mcflurry// WHOA
Yea I kno........
You can't keep up so call it quits//
You as bad as a virgin just suckin' tits//
My-my, so don't even try, cuz if you step to me you'll be running back screamin' WHY!!!!!!!!!!//

try and up your vocab... you have some good potential

^^^agreed... keep rhymin

"My rhymes come quick like a 1minute man who can't prevail"... feeling the punchline there... hehehe... mah favorite in the rhyme actually... hey girl you did straight... it started off well, but then I got simpler, and it fell off at some points, and the flow here was straight...

Peace out

yea I kno but that was off the crazy dome doin' it for fun

a couple of alright punches in there nice flow uppin the volcab would help aside from that alright post keep it up