"my Utopia"
 

"MY UTOPIA"

My utopia is a place where mothers feed they children
Not where mothers sell crack out the same building
My utopia is a place where we can smoke purple haze
Not a place where we have to pull out ak's and blaze
My utopia is a place where we can sit around and drink 40's
Not a place where we have to worry about the authorities
My utopia is a place where we can leave a door unlocked
Not a place where u sleep on the couch with your gun cocked
My utopia is a place where u can just breath
Not a place where u wanna hold your breath until u fall asleep.

Not diggin this thread at all. It lacks substance

And the usage of Utopia is being used in a rather ironic context.
A utopia is a place where its morally perfect.
Unless smoking weed and getting drunk is part of your ideal moral utopia world.

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A utopia is a perfect world(in the specific persons mind) so in my mind this is a small part of my utopia, u and noone else can define my utopia, but on the same level i cant define yours or anybody else's. a utopia is not a fact its an opinion, there is not right or wrong
ie: abortion
in my utopia there would be none
in somebody else's there might be

MAN i like this piece but i seen better ones from yo other pieces but this suggesting some kinda Thug Mension....thats my Utopia..lol

Wun

Utopia...hmmm...

...well simply done...you approached the topic of living in a 'ghetto' like life, and how it's so bad, that your Utopia would be something that is quite normal and constant for people living more well off...


i thought the ending was a bit off....i mean if it was meant to keep the reader going, like there's so much more , that you can't list it all, then i felt you could've ended it with something better, more striking...and if it wasn't then i felt it would've been better 'fade' it with 2-4 lines of oversight or something....

but as i said, simply done, but fairly effective...