Lyrikil vs Duce
 

Verses due tonight (saturday)
3-0 KO or 5 votes wins
5-10 bars
no d/r hater votes

lets do dis

Lyrikil use this one...there was dificulties with the other oen so we battlin in here

You a 'feeble' lad, aint no reason for ya to spit ya 'pathetic' rhymes at me, you 'vulnerable' with your 'powerless' 'ungaurded' shit dat nobody wanna see//
Your rhymes are 'anemic' 'asthenic' and 'adynamic', totally 'engulfed' by your own stupidity, hell they will always be 'incapacitated'//
Its pitiful how 'defenseless' and 'helpless' you are, you like a 'unprotected' pussy, totally 'exposed', Can I say you 'puny' and 'scrawny'?//
I should call you 'glass' cuz you 'fragile' and i can 'see right through you', Ya 'drained' and 'exhausted' cuz my crew can 'see through you' too//
You 'dilute' rap your lyriks are so 'decripit', 'Dehibilitated' should be ya nickname cuz your so 'enervated'//
Against me your 'helpless' and your jus 'forceless', your skills are 'shoddy' and 'flimsy', you came 'weakly' and i made ya look 'wimpy'//
Lyrikil i jus killed any chance of you bein 'mystique', so ya betta 'critique' ya 'technique' before ya 'speak' and begin a losing 'streak'//

Descriptions and definitions
1st bar~~inside the ' and ' are synonyms for weak
2nd bar~~inside ' and ' are more synonyms for weak
3rd bar~~more for weak
4th bar~~fragile is weak and a term for glass and u can see rite through glass and then drained and exhausted are more for weak
5th bar~~inside ' and ' are more things for weak
6th bar~~more ways to say weak
7th bar~~mystique-mysterious, critique-work on, technique-his style


Good luck man

uppin for this foo

uppin again...remember midnight tonite (est. time)

yo what the fuck i no i didnt just waste this verse on your ass...we both agreed we had to drop by saturday midnight (est time)....but to let u have a chance i will let u keep prewritin your shit like i no your doin and come at me....just hurry the hell up

WTF yo bitch post up

did u use a thesaurus to write this whole rhyme.. lol.. nah just joking, I'll vote if this kid shows...

nah no thesauras here.....i have increased my vocab alot by reading through dictionaries and thesaurases before but i jus used those off top of my head...i keyed this shit i just remembered them from earlier that day becuz i had jus read alot of em anyway this kid betta hurry up

nice shit homie ill vote wen the other duke posts but yo can u plz vote on KOKIENA vs CON and ILLMATIX VS COn we really need votes thnx homie

yo i think this is a no show this man aint showin he scured