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dis is amend's ex woman...
nah this aint amend this is GUEDEZ (his ex girl)uppin VENEZUELAN rap so until i get my own name peep all this out
-Yo-- fuck all tha sidez -Dis Venezuelan shit RIGHT -Rydin to da beach -I thought of a beat -These words flowed from tha dome to tha wood (yea trees make paper) -I tried to calm myself ... job done not too good -I can't help lookin at otha nino's -You see a small bitch n wanna beatup -I'm sorry i have to attack ya -I just need to get some points across -When we was togetha i tried to be boss -Not too sappy in this note -I just see things from a different boat -So I look at other men... -Dosn't matter b-c all my love goes to Amend -Amend wants to be friends.. not to break up again -Well, since then its been hell -I'm not feelin too well -I think I might choke on a bone you picked -But I'm thowin it in your face, not suckin ya dick this time bitch! -Now i might sound hostile -But anger hits me everytime another gets him wild -I'm his down ass bitch -He's even been downtown to tha clit -You little hoes better belive that -You can't get my man for more than a one night stand -I had your daddy tied up longer than you could ever stand... -You hurt me I'll hurt you worse -With my voices, fists, and this verse -Now i'm mad at everybody now -Not rehearsed but free-stylin now -My face is red with Fire -You want my boo's 9 inches? -Want to take three away bitches?? -I'll put you six feet under -Put you in a human blender -Chop ya in pieces and wrap ya head in some plastic -Get the rest of ya corpse and burn dem bitches wit acid -This bitch cant realize the love thrown to him -He catches it and is confused like a 5 yr. old basemen -Love-- it comes with hugs kisses and TRUST -I love you but I'm think you just LUST -You want new pussy to fuck -Just no this- the baddest bitch- isn't just luck -I wish I was a spider so i could spit like a web -Round after round till I'm not hungry.. im fed -I try to be ya Angel and bow down and bless ya -My stupidity and lyin got you questinin' why -Like the town- ZERO TOERANCE of drugs-- Guedez has zero tolerance of slugs -I play with words like i play with dudes.... -Shit's so retarded sounds my mouth just pooped -You can't eat a single pringle -I want us to be a duce couple -Together in Kuwait if thats what it takes... -Your the OSMAMA to my BIN LADEN -With only half... I'll stop game runnin' -On the way to leave my love soon -I dont wanna leave -I'd hide in ya shoe to be close to you! Uppin for feedback |
Wow, This Is So Weak, You Could Really Be The Real Amend!
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I didn't really feel it. You have a unique style ....
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lol... umm too long... waay too long... just from my scan of it you need to elevate... keep rhymin
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Wack
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lol.......<~from the real AMEND
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damn......what the hell was the point......that shit was toooooo damn long and wackkkkkk as hell..........keep it up
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