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Cassius 03-23-03 12:49 AM

A bad man...
 
Pretty quik track but im feelin it ..tell me what u think...

www.soundclick.com/cassiusakaexist

theres 2 version click the mastered version please..

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=277689&q=Lo

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=277689&q=Hi

www.soundclick.com/cassiusakaexist

break it down pros n cons..


pz drop links

[.KroniK.] 03-23-03 02:45 AM

DAMN!!!!!!!!!! beat is nice.......lyrics is hot as fuck.......hell yeah u sound like a Pa rapper yo.......damn yo........shit was on point and mad ill........shit yo holla at me for a collabo yo fa sho we'd tear suttin up fa sho

~KroniK~

FiL-Be-iLL 03-23-03 11:40 AM

beats sick...ya flows cool until u pop out into 5oCent mode...that shit is wack...a gimmick...like singing hooks or horrorcore rap...but do you, dont do 50...
oNE...

Cassius 03-23-03 02:24 PM

naa ,not any point did i even think of fifty nor do i think it sounds like it...Last verse is freed and thats my style say im tryna be fifty or watever but ive always rapped like that...


yea hit me up kronik im always down for sumthin,and good ass looks on the replies

Baysick 03-23-03 03:27 PM

told you what I thought at RM... good shit

Silhouette 03-23-03 05:40 PM

thanks for the reply to my track....now imma return the favor....this is really well done....definitly feelin this joint...the transition from ya rappin to singin is commendable...nice shit...if you ever wanna collab let me know

9.5/10

Cassius 03-23-03 11:47 PM

no doubt man....aim-deadlythug17...thanx alot

BLACK FLAME 03-24-03 05:55 AM

nice beat I'ma be rel though I don't think you repped it like you should have the flow was cool a little different and shit the chorus is decent and shit lyrics are straight the second verse was flowed much better and shit. delivery fell off at spots

S.T.R.A.I.E. 03-24-03 02:36 PM

U got a tight flow dawg. as far az 50 cent......Id listen 2 thiz shit b4 that,so fuck him.lol....nice beat and u rode it coo."never get high unless tha weed iz in front of me" stay upppppp

Cassius 03-24-03 03:52 PM

thanx man..thats reall pz

Cassius 03-24-03 03:53 PM

oh yea black thanx for the reply homie..but i listened to the track over 100 tymes and really i see know flaws,my delivery sounds coo to me..but i dunno u may be right..i did write the 2 verses really fast,and the last 1 is freed..who knows..

good look on the reply tho pz

DaLyricalWhiz 03-24-03 05:27 PM

hott shit manye, dope lyrics
nice shit here, peeps shouldn't be sleeping

Cassius 03-25-03 06:04 PM

thanx alot

Avalon 03-25-03 08:18 PM

Hum... I'll tell you this...


intro to long...

style is old and pretty played...

delivery... not bad...

You sound like your talking... no enthusiasm... sound like you'd be standin in the same place on stage all night...

Get some punches... the lyrics are like hip hop in 93...

voice good... you atleast are riddin the beat well...

The hook is terrible...

and this wasn't a freestyle... if so... start writing... if not... start tellin the truth...


not hatin... tellin you what I think...


Keep spittin... let the lyrics grow up...





Avalon...



ps... Atleast show you're a bad man... what you mentioned let me know you were like any other man out there... *shakes head* but maybe that was just me...

Cassius 03-26-03 11:23 AM

lmao,,.......wasnt a free? actully it was..93 ? ok sure,my styles my style,and fuck punchlines,punchlines are nothin but filler....or for battles..i do me..

and intro is too long,its as long as the intro on the beat! i cant start rappin till the drums drop so now i know for a fact ur hatin..if ur gonna hate make some sence


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