aint this America
 

I thought this was america people/
or maybe I tought that this whole world is evil/
gotta look'em straight for anyone believe you/
America's real look in the eyes of your country/
i never thought i have the identity/
this country changes like new models of infinities/
protested and arrested for disorderly conduct/
if i cant speak the word then i'll get saved like hockey pucks/
voices are heard and they speak louder than black sticks/
keep our yells to our selves let blowhorn amplify the shit/
lift ya head keep it up like tupac said/
dont back down to anyone including the pigs/
this is the country of freedom/
but we aint free/
gotta live up to the standards wherever we be/
its prostitutes sellin they ass trying to get into college/
getting nickles in dimes just to show off they privates/
im almost done but never too soon to give yall my input/
show u somethin bout america and tell you what to do with it/

To be continued i gotta go to work!

this was aiight... kinda slow and rickety but i caught the flow a little... here and there, nice message for the kids... what i use to do was mess around in speech class, every time we'd do a parlimentary procedure meeting, i would get called out of order, and for the fuck of it, i would yell "only in america!" don't know if that means anything while replyin' you but oh well... i said it...

peace

a polititca type rhyme huh... lol... I liked it, it was aight, had a decent flow to it, vocab was aight, and the messege in it was interesting...

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