Crook Ed Vs BANKS_50
 

Rules-
First to 5 votes
3-0 KO
No bullshit voting
12-16 lines Max
Due in Half Hour

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Listen up kid, quick the gimmick cuz wea all know this Fairy blows
You cant rap admit it and go back to bumpin B2K in ya stereo
This hoe couldnt compete if everyone were kind to him
Thats why Im beatin him easily like playin Peekaboo with blind kids
Ya time to shine was never, so Im leavin you black and blue
Its like I love to hit crack the way Im straight smackin this dude
six lines and ya already threw, I shouldnt even finish
But im still gunna Pop ya Eye after Im done eatin spinach
Chippin ya teeth, say Im swingin my fists with brass knuckles
Layin in ya puddle of blood Ill just sit back and chuckle
Cuz Its lovely to watch these newbie Emcess try to brawl
And after I toss you off this board only hell can break your fall
This cat aint ballin, Broke ass spits a bunch of lies hes Wack
Yea He Banks 50 Bucks after hes done sayin, "You want fries with that"

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Post soon...

Dont herb out...

it sems u not gonna spit first so let me go ahead and get this over with.

some people say my mind is dangerous//but i say its that chrome stainless//so u better warn yo boys//cause i got a punch heaveir than roys//got more artilery than that cartoon zoids//bitch im goku and u Lloyd,boy// back down before i spit rounds instead of hot rhymes//cause i got more tips then america most wanted hot-line//i always stay with a hot clip//full yo brain with hot lead and thats the only way u be thinking of hot shit,u not blood or crip//so get a grip and dont flip when i call u a bitch,bicth//i cant beleive im waisten time on u//this will be the second time cause the first yo momma kept her mind on u//haha shits funny tell yo wifey im not hubby//cause every time she go to the clinic she sounds lieka telly-tubbie//uh-oh check me whem im spitten em,flippen em,p-40 clippen em, my shells is like UPS i stay shippen em

come with somethen hard cause i didnt.jus a lil somethen. holla at cha boy.

shit this was a good battle on both ends but i got to give it to
vote: banks_50
his punches were a lil harder and he had a better rhyme scheme

best punch though goes to crook ed:Thats why Im beatin him easily like playin Peekaboo with blind kids

*Sighs*.... the wackness is out of my hands now...Please somebody guide these newbies..Please...

hey this is juss my opinion everyone likes a different style off rap
dont get upset because "I" thought he did better then u
its juss an opinion dawg

haha
 

Listen Up newbs here my break down

Crook Ed- shit i felt


Listen up kid, quick the gimmick cuz wea all know this Fairy blows
You cant rap admit it and go back to bumpin B2K in ya stereo

^^ nice opener, n a nice punch homie


Cuz Its lovely to watch these newbie Emcess try to brawl
And after I toss you off this board only hell can break your fall
This cat aint ballin, Broke ass spits a bunch of lies hes Wack
Yea He Banks 50 Bucks after hes done sayin, "You want fries with that"


^^ i like those punches n shit in there


BANKS 50 - shit i felt

I Didnt really find nethin in ur verse dat caught my eye no offence dawg keep elevating

vote - CROOK ED

Now can yall vote on con vs Illmatixx
we need votes thnx

Gran Thef break ya votes down mate!!!

Crook Ed:
Flow=8
Punches=7
Multi's=7
Overall=7.5

Your verse's flow was the best point i could see, but your punches and multi's where just standard, But good tho don't get me wrong.

Banks 50:
Flow=6
Punches=7
Multi's=6.5
Overall=6

Again your punches and multi's where standard, but i never felt your flow

Vote=Crook Ed

Pz

Punches::: Crook Ed
Flow::: Crook Ed
Wordplay::: Crook Ed
Vocab::: Tie
Metas::: Banks 50
Multis::: Tie
Personals::: Niether
Structure::: Crook Ed
Originality::: Tie

Final Vote:::::::::::::Crook Ed:::::::::::::::

LoL... to all those who are thinkin Im mad.. Im not... its just that... you new people to the site dont really know the... I duno how to put it... the...the basic ideas and punches and wordplay in battling... Gran thef, Im not mad.. you just dont know whats up quite yet.. lol.. everyone will elevate becuz we all were just starting out but It was clear to me that I was battlin a new coming Emcee.. and I know I won..Not being cocky, but I know I did...Thnx for all that voted..and Im not mad or anything... just tryna make ppl realize they gotta look at the battles and see punches and wordplay and flow and all that stuff... and if you dont know what that is PM me and Ill help you out...

Peace

im a vote crook ed...even tho sumone sed banks punchder were harder i didnt think so...i feel he had wordplay down on both ends but my vote is crook ed...i still thowt banks had real good shit just not as good as crook

VOTE=Crook Ed

im a vote crook ed...even tho sumone sed banks punchder were harder i didnt think so...i feel he had wordplay down on both ends but my vote is crook ed...i still thowt banks had real good shit just not as good as crook

VOTE=Crook Ed

if either a ya got time cud ya vote for either me or 50...and bansk man dont do a retaliation coz i didn t vote ya man

peace

betta punches....
disses...

This cat aint ballin, Broke ass spits a bunch of lies hes Wack
Yea He Banks 50 Bucks after hes done sayin, "You want fries with that"


^^^^^funny....and did it....
vote=crooked...




do me a fav., peeps are sleepin on r.b......hit up a vote...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34852

this one to…
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=34850

my win