conquest
 

gods given me a talent to rip every mc on dis earth-
some see it as a gift, others see it as a curse-
like alexander the great, im here to conquer all-
me being too cocky and confident is going to be my downfall-
i can hit u wit game more diverse dan religions-
smack ms cleo a 100 times so she can see my vision-
im seekin to devour rookie mcs like da devil seekin a soul-
i ben plannin **** since i was ten years old-
not patriotic, im on dis conquest some call me pyshotic-
shootin niggas up moe dan a fiend shootin up narcotics-
one day my empire will fall and bow to another great kingdom-
my veruses is engraved in u, evertime u read-em-

9/11 isn't cool to make fun of yet. i know quite a bit of people that would even cuss you out for that one! otherwise it's an average verse.

^^^I agree....i see that you edited it out tho...it's a nice line and all, just bit to early for that shit...other than that outlandish slander (ass-hole...lol) this was a descent verse, nice structure, and vocab...descent...descent....

7/10

P.e.a.c.e.

yo i thought it was aight.. pretty short but it flows well.. but i liked the rhyme scheme sounds like some type a shit id spit, nonetheless it was short and sweet keep it up.