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SiNiStEr ChEmIcAlS in my MeNtAl
Sinister chemicals administered into my inner-mental.//
feelin' so spent yo, spun in tha back my head, woa..// where'm'I goin', walkin' aimlessly with no knowledge of what my name might be.// never taking this shit lightly, I'll dose 5 E's, an' still try this ketamine.// I never been close to anythin' like an OD.// visions intermittant like watchin' a movie, slowly, only..// I'm in control overload while my minds in another-world.// brain stem curled like it was dried and withered.// play'n with scissors, then wonder why my wrist hurts.// maybe I should think-first, before I act.// before I rap, 'cause if not I might crack from tha crack.// smoke that out-a can, then sent to a different land.// with dick in hand, searchin' for another rock.// an' if I can't find that, I'll flip out an' flip out my glock.// empty tha clip out and have people un-able ta walk.// it's not me, it's all the drugs that I'm on.// < HOOK > you got chach, gimme some.// is that a rock, hit me up.// an acid drop, hell why not.// any drug ya have, bitch I want.// I'm so fucked up, from this 3 5 I just bought.// (3.5 grams in a ball) a ball for me to snuff up, see anybody an' feel free ta start beef, they get fucked up...// nothin' can stop the ha-vock I un-leash, no-one's got a step up on me.// step walk on 3 shots of yeager, stager after the 8th then take-yer date home hommie.// I'm the only man I know that can blow 2 viles of meth in one go.// an' still go to my boyz crib and dose some morph...//(morphine) of course this shit's hard on my body, and my memory's blotty.// you think that's gonna stop me, hardly, you got percs I'll pop 5 and still drop speed.// talk sloppy, slurin' from the slur of perscription's hittin' my comprehension.// oh yea I forgot to mention, when I'm bent-on liquid g I see 4 dimentions.// forced ta bend socks... < other voice > what the fuck < end voice >.// sorry, that's just my friend ben dawg, he lives in my head and just talks.// edges me on to do more drugs, drink more booze and puke on more rugs.// become more rude and rob you for ya brand new lugs.// < HOOK > |
uppin'...
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uppin'.. come on 3 replies that's all I really want
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that was one of the best drug drops Ive read
I was feelin it a lot and I sorta got a feel for the hook uppin PS please check out my open mic "Hooligan X" cuz I really respect ur opinion and want to read ur critique bout it,thx |
.Killin' It.
Damn kid... you killed this joing. Hot spit, i'm madly uppin'... your vocab. was on point.
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Dope shit dogg, I was impressed with this one, deep shit, souds like maybe yo actually been there huh dogg.... I liked the flow and rhymes, some good vocab, got some real meanin to it too man.. Good stuff, keep it up!
Peace Out Yo!!!! |
What's at cost in tha Land of tha Lost? I might not agree, but it's a good flow. Keep on...Sober anyone?
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wurd, thx 4 all tha feedback.. yea I have been there meadskillz, I was on 2 blue handshakes (E) when I wrote the first verse...
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Yea cant say im agreein wit that topic but ya dropped this piece well. i think it'd sound better in audio tho. ya vocab was nice and ya flow worked but i got lost fuck loadsa times. anyway check mine shinobi life aight peace
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