help me please
 

i know some just can't do this audio stuff but really i wanna atleast get better then i am at it so go listen to my stuff tell me what's wrong and where to improve

www.soundclick.com/bands/dirtboy69_music.htm

there's only one track on there so you might need more i'll post more if needed

you sound like you're just talking... put some "oomph" into it... sound like you one piiiiiissed off mofo or having fun... depends what message you're tryin to send... drop me a pm with links to your next audio that you do and i'll check it and tell ya if you've improved... and dont worry about sounding stupid or anything... cause thats what i think is hoding you back... well thats what stops me from doing audio and dishing it out on the net... anyways keep rhymin

i don't know when i'll do audio next but i'll definatly give you a link