Raptured------------light
 

Im resting these five fingers to death---
Inside the cornerstone of chains contained with blastocoel--
a breath
a victim resilient to stress and the vilidity to be set free--
I fly with figments that can transmit clarity to the psycho pupil being----
I am highest of them all---With out this central physical phenomenon your tears have less to cry apon-- DEATH
Misleading introverted high class dreaming jock---
Helpless indangerment of a human seeing strapped up to a wealthy modus vivendi rock----
I'd like to hear him through the gates inwhich my life was raptured---
From the light-- a constant feeling to far from healing and the ability to hold tight--
And tightly to a right mind set to the stages of this innocent childs past times i'd like to freely grasp his innocense to take a short breath---
But im resting these five fingers to a hapless misleading death--------------


These are some innovating words

uppinnnnnn for some words

Tight vocab...Ill concept. Something no-one else has touched on.
keep bringin' it...

thanks for the words--alright uppin for some more

tyte vocab... felt you on this... noth'n else to say....

keep dropp'n..................

uppinnnnnnn

sexy as shit man..haha its ill

hmmm...


...this was strange....strangely intriguing that is....

...had a real darkly sting to it....pulls the reader into the piece...i like how you executed the beginning and the end so well...

...once or twice it was a bit sketchy...but overall, was a very good piece...different too...

..McCoys Crisps..(formely respecto)...

thanks for all the nice words uppin

hmmm..interesting....i agree nice vocabs...tight flow...how u structured the piece made it more attractive...a little weak on the rhyme scheme but poems aint always to rhyme so its good...nice decriptive imagery words...all in all..madd shit!!..keeponit

uppin all words are appreciated believe me!!

yo vocab was flowin with ya structure..it was ill fa show--i could easily see your inmagery you had described

DAmn Vocabs were of the heezy fosheeezy......nice contend...and nicely kept short form.....prop's to ya 4 that