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X Ecution 03-24-03 05:38 PM

title: drastic concept
 
title: drastic concept

as i express feelings through this paper and pen in hand/
ill unfold the situation and divide the plan/
the caged demon is released with mind power, great/
for go a new oppertunity, a new mind state/
let the words explode like a uncliped grenade/
drastic thoughts, yet deadly afraid/
driven through sorrow, drowned in deppression/
a mind with hate, filled with aggression/

deacon 03-24-03 05:42 PM

Short and nice--
I might would have ended it slightly differently but pretty good.

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X Ecution 03-24-03 10:44 PM

^^^^

X Ecution 03-26-03 04:43 PM

^^^^^


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