just came to me at school!!
 

15 cents for what a blow job you cheap son of a bitch//
now here my 2 cents becasue im putting up a fence//
so why dont you go out to the streets and gat a sence//
you may be from the slums but dont act like a bum//
becasue i get a sence you swallo 15 punds of cum//
dont talk like a G cause you know i anit dum//
so why dont you come gat a taest before you get slaped in the face//
cause i only rap to somebeats with hard bass//
im just rideing through spilling my case//
do you thin that you can blow a flow bigger than mine//
just dont waste you time to compare to mine//
your mom says that yours anit as big as mine//
dont make me jump you cause you know it is a crime//
jump in the ride and let my rymes blow you mind//
but if i was nice i might just let go of your pupet strings//
becasue you know that your rymes just dont ring//
so how do they say it in your streets tris~wis~wisl//
well i got a pis~pisl//
that dont stop at nothing to make your body drip~drizel.

thx for reading! peace

so why dont you come gat a taste before you get slaped in the face//
cause i only rap to somebeats with hard bass//

i really liked these two lines....it was a pretty good rhymes for hit you right on the spot
keep postin

ottawa elite
 

i'm glad bitch that i come from the slums as long as i anit comming from where you comming from
stupid bitch
hit you wit the tool plus the clip
make you shiver and twitch
you should of known it was bleek
wraped in a sheet
36 witiness and they all afarid to speak
and thats what happened
i pulled out the hand cannon
all the kids began rann'n
left a hole in you the size of the grand canyon
and you anit even a high school freshman
i'm a veteren
you best get steppin
cause you just a kid talking about invisable weapons
even drexal anit stressin
let me learn you a leason
OE
mother fucker
there anit no second guessing

oh i see i am going to have to flip my shit over to deal with you//
because you still dont know what i can do//
hit me with a clip dont make me fick you lip punk//
just make sure it anit in the way when i trip in your ass//
the size of the ground canyon were have i heard that//
oh yea your a copy CAT//
wow i couldent tell through the whole thing wether you were trying to kill me or tell me how gay you are//
you be talking about a freshman i think i might have to teach your ass a lesson//
to let you know i do have an invisable weapon that be my mind but i dont have the time so lets press rewind//
you wana test so second guess this//
i wana see the way that you dress becasue i think prep will suet you best//
were you come from you might have wear a vest so i sugest you invest in your mom//
so before you come back my way i hope you think before what you say//
because i might have to drop one in you one day.

come on peopel read this shit

ok ride or die ill make u a deal, ill werk with u if u dont post that shit any more, and for the record. o bleek ur shit was phat, but it sounded pre written but iuf u wrote that it was phat, but any way ride pm me well get sum shit goin

have to disagree... bleek that was wack... why do people always try to come across as a net gangster??

ride-or-die.... yours was better than bleeks... but you need to work on it... would be an average battle verse... elevate and you will kill people... keep rhymin

thx inspire i am working on the vocab

yea you do that......read the DICKionary^^^^not you ride......but yea keep it up

thx shy

Re: ottawa elite
 

DONT FUCKING DO THIS AGAIN! IF I SEE ANYMORE POSTS OF YOUR RHYMES IN OTHER PEOPLES OPEN MICS, I WILL DELETE THEM!

This Was Pretty Weak .. Basic Content..No Flow ...

Wasn`t Liking..

ya well you know i am new so i try

it was iight try to make more sense like actually rap about suttin u would be able to talk about and make sense of it nah mean...stay elevatin...>>>ONE<<<

yo bitch whats the deal get down on your knees cuz here comes the real deal