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~RuThLEss~ 03-25-03 02:23 PM

~Sweet Dreams~
 
Yo this shit i wrote goes to my shawty/wifey/hoe/pro..lol wutever u call it nowdayz...lol

I stay up late at night...
closing my eyes very tite..
thinkin of u...
i picture a shiny day...
ur rite there standing not so far away...
ur beautiful eyes...
two shining stars...
and that smile...
the one that makes my emotions pile...
i close my eyes so very tite...
as day fades to night...
we're holding hands walkin down a moonlit beach...
lookin up in the sky...
with all the stars shining so bright...
god this seems so right...
as i turn...i see an angel...
trying to make out words, but they end up tangled...
i lean over to whisper in your ear...
to say those three little words...
as i open up the eyes that i kept closed so tite...
i picture us...
and only us.....
u and me.

...man This wusn't a Big kinda POEM like my last ones with Big azz Vocabs but worth writing it.....

deacon 03-25-03 03:37 PM

Simplistic but honestly man if you threw in anything more (vocab)it would have ruined it--nice words

deacon 03-25-03 03:38 PM

also check out rapture---light when you get the chance

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~RuThLEss~ 03-25-03 03:47 PM

AIght Dawg but i got to bounce out ama check when i get home

~RuThLEss~ 03-26-03 12:59 PM

UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN


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