Round 1: Angelic SheShe
 

Topic: Shadows
Due: Tuesday April 1st.
Line max: 16 lines any more will not be counted.

The top 15 will advance.

Darkness overcomes and daylight disappears
Lunar Eclipse’s condenses all your fears ~
You took your life with deaths precious red lace
Believed you’d see heaven instead of that other place ~
Death thought wrong as you fell into shadows of hate
You took your life so he took your fate ~
Encryptions of lost souls condemn the final arsenal
All death wanted was freedom, all you gave it was hell ~
Your shadows lingered next to your new reality
They’re your dirty little secrets from your obscure fatality ~
Face them in fear or face them with honor and dignity
Confront your shadows and face your mortal enemy ~
Negligence is intelligible to my psychiatric needs
My shadows follow me from hunger to feed ~
Sarcophagus closes, you lost this fight
The shadows take over and there will be only night ~

closed until judging.

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This piece was hot i think it should go on. lots of emotion behind it

I liked this piece you should go to the next round....

ty for voting on mine

vote = goes next round

vote: It should go to tha next round...hope I see you there...good competition, but I think you voted me off survivor style...but thats alright, no hard feelings...lol

Probably, just probably, the best peice i've read so far..

..i don't think i need to say anything about it really...had about 2-3 flaws, which were not that relevant anyway...

..Vote: DOES go through to the next round...

..(i tihnk we have a surprise front runner in this tourney now..)..

8.5/10