Pessimism
 

Divorce is such a fad these days
No guarantees a girl will stay
Even the sweetest chic would get sick of me
A million voices on the TV
Say, "Don't take it, girl! Why don't you leave?"
So she splits 'cause I made her peeve
"You left the toilet seat up again
You know I hate it when you do that, Ben"
Even if I try my best to please
Maybe she'll get fed up with my ugly knees
Twenty years of covering for this slob
And I won't be as cute as the new heartthrob
"Here's the papers...I'm leaving now
Eww, your heart is bleeding...let me rip it out!
If you ever need anything just give me a shout
Like betrayal or rejection or fear and doubt"
Love is risk but I never win that game
I'm lonely but playing only leaves me lame
I limp enough as it is already
Marriage is a pile of seed confetti
Should I let it pass me by...or run me over like Andretti?

nice! i kinda liked it. it flowed nice
fav part "So she splits 'cause I made her peeve
"You left the toilet seat up again
You know I hate it when you do that, Ben""
i really don't know why it just kinda stood out to me
one thing PERSONALLY i felt it was a lil simple but that's not a bad thing i still enjoyed it. keep it up

not bad..we all have our flaws..theres no perfect girl or guy but we choose tobelieve were perfect for eachother at certain times in life...this was simple but to the point and worth a read..peac

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