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T_Wheezy9127 03-26-03 06:28 PM

Bounce To This
 
put a whole lotta muthufuckin gin in yo cup
even the designated driver stay tippin in up
we gon't have a fuckin party G's up whores down
don't be hoggin all the shit, nigga pass that weed round
you can smoke till yo eyes look like japanese kin
we gonna tear it down saturday, sunday we repent
get yo muthufuckin feet off of my table bra
we gon't party till we wake the fuckin neighbors up

cause can't nobody
leave a fuckin southside party
so everybody
stay drinkin and actin like they retarded

i stay bucked up and fucked up like my nigga lil boosie
if a nigga get it crunk we settin it off like juvie
cause i keep them thangs clean because i'm pose to
nigga be stuntin in the hummer ridin clean in the nolia(magnolia)
don't be ponderin yourself bout how i gets my shit
make enough to stay blingin and keep my pearl tongue licked
i'm a afrodeeziac, nigga puff puff give
be wheezin why that's my name and thats how i'm gon't live

cause can't nobody
leave a fuckin southside party
so everybody
stay drinkin and actin like they retarded

the moral of the story, this ain't no aesop fable
drink and fuck a whole lot a whores if you able
you only live one life so do the damn thang
"Carpe Diem?" what the fuck that man sayin
i'm my own keeper i ain't got no fuckin brothers
thats cool cuz i'm PRODUCTIONS ride or die muthufuckas
if i wanted yo opinion i'd give you that shit
"Live today die tomorrow!" boy i'm feelin that shit

Kapone 03-27-03 12:48 AM

good drop, decent -intentions- the only problem i found was some of the line breakes [ where u say sumthin then set up the ryhme] contradicted the begining of the sentence or the next ryhme to the leader didnt match up right, you prolly coulda made a triple or quad ryhme but it werked, i can hear the type of beat u had in mind kinda like " aint no party like a west side party" good drop mane, elevate, but still a good drop


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