Ventin....
 

not wrth reading..peace

Most definetly felt, content...

...no criticism on thisd piece, it was just very raw, and emotions seemed to be vented real good...

...anyway, as i said before, hope you find the right decision to make for both of you....

...respect...

RAw like Var said...and Long piece but the contend was verry verry good and emotions were expressed...thatss what makes it great poem....


peep mine Iraq VS US war

that was nice man. very emotional very raw. you say what u feel so well...one love man.

sure

Other than the way it was written i understood the script-- keep it up