i need help new to this shyt .
 

some of my shit is sick just cant put it together rite ... any one got ideas .... read my shit tell me wat u think

maybee if you didnt talk shit and then runaway bitch, ppl would return the respect, but naw, u wanna call everyone a bitch then runnaway, fuckin white 10 yr ols these days

dawg fuck u will u from ... wanna throw down

just put ur shit in lil rhymes
think of a word tun it into a sentence then make a followin sentence that rhymes
u shud b ok

you know I's think if ya gonna talk alot of shit for nat sayin much then I give ya advice.........back that shit up yo

dawg the best way to get good at this is to watch and learn. read other niggas rhymes that u like and then see how they word things ,see how the use punches and meta4s. anger spittin is out(thats what u do by the way) u wanna make the other kat looks stupid and at the same time make ya audience say ooooooooohhh!

Forrest Gump probably just gave the best advice.. " Watch And Learn " it will all come together someday...