NoNsense (about war)
 

just some small insights


Bush should be pushed of the pedistal he cushioned himself on/
Visited rigid countries to get rid of their bombs/
Disarm and withdraw from anything that could cause harm/
No one bothers us cuz of our infinite fireamrs/
So FUCK nuke em all Bush quit starin at your palms/
Everyone panic and act frantic, dont ever remain calm/
Everyone join in to destroy our fuckin lives/
It could happen on the count of five/ no one left alive/
no one has survived/ no one has realized/
no one has real eyes/ to see what i see/
war is to jeopradize the future in our lives/
You mindless numbskulls/ bodies will fill up by the bucketfulls/
bucketsfull of innocent civilians who wanted to fuckin show/
their kids down the right path, not down an empty hole/
a life of plentiful happiness/ Cmon be skeptical/
My thoughts are like a full clip, fuck that a sash full of rounds/
We dont need Saddan taking out a handful of our towns/


Man fuck the goverment, fuck all that, Cmon keep destroying and making enemies, no one gives a fuck about us....you stupid constipated weiner dogs!!


critique....

respond y'all

Who's side are you on? Hard to tell...I agree with half of it....good observations...good piece.

read like poetry more than rhyme. i agree with the message but i think vocab was a little basic here.

good to see a non-gangsta concept here.

thanx....im on no ones side....i just dont agree with war

uppins

nice piece dogg
the flow was a lil tough to follow at times
but overall it was a good drop
I also like the sense of sarcasm in it