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24_inch_rims vs. J.Smith hk,la,f4
1 round
u go first 0-30 lines |
One nation under the blues, I blaze to bruse...
beat you 2def till you lose, face removed... This cat swallow like milwalkee niggas, around kegs of brews... pegs and screws, kick ya head, with my legs and shoes... untill split ya head in two, untill ya face is red and blue... I'm dirty like old money they call grandfather stock... pull ya spine out, and hang u like, a pendulum in a grandfather clock... Peace lovin faggit, everytime you attempt to rip me... I make you see god, like a doped out hippie... Even if you wrote ya verse in thursday, ya rap would be deadlines... I don't make news, I charge a buck 50 for my deep headlines... I'll rope you, smoke you, abduct, combust, and scope you... leave with a cracked head, damn is u doped duke, you defeatin me, is just a hoaxed fluke, I'll vaporize ya fruty ass like I smoked juice... Dog, ya punchlines, is like roy J, lightweight attemptin to be heavy... you ride dick, like you in the back seat of richards chevy... Gaylord Focker, its time to meet ya parents... Leave somany bullet holes in ya flesh, you'll appear transparent... Shoot ya gay ass, to start them hemroids flarin... Ya moms look like viv fox, i fucked her with no socks, she sucked my cock... Till i popped like hot rocks, and left a yogart stain, on her hot twat, even though I missed, the bitch, I still hit her hot spot... Ridicule, belittle you, ignorant fool... ya rap stinks, like fertilizer made with beligerant stool... I'm the master bastard, that pop toast like mechanical appliance... and plant punches in yo face, like the roots of botanical science... this is the second cumming, like jesus had a brother... My raps scrap perfection, as if mary was my mother... You'll get puffed, snuffed, sufficated, stuffed and smothered... like a philadelphia cheese steak from mister hero... The only reason ya raps are infinate, is cause you're a twisted zero |
what happened to 0-30 lines
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Is that your best, that 's nothin man
Like a nipple on a chest,and because I can I'm gonna keep goin, keep showin,keep shinin and on rhymin, its not skill its timin I'm not lyin, just replyin and as I told yo mama, Keep tryin and you say I ride dick, bul shit cause u do and yor siser to ya see I was goin to use "yo mama" But that would involve to much drama see I'm like a pistol when I rap pull my trigga and here me snap just like that u'll be dead and gone its wrong the way i did yo mom and yo girl, shw almost made me hurl the way she looked,the way she cooked and when i licked her I had to stop pull up and stick er. |
i votes J.Smith .. better flo.. harder punches .. and some good multis there to nice 1 man
vote : J.Smith |
j smith
24 inch rims.......... the name says it all vote=j smith |
haha nice 1 dawd
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j smith started off kinda strong, then got really weak until he got to the end he brought up the level a lil bit.
24 inch rims verse was way to basic. Return the favor both of you please and vote on my battle with Even Minded. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35606 |
j smith got this one
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hey return the favor ya'll. i took time to read ya shit. show some love. :::::: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=35606
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j smith took this shit 4rill
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j-dot-smith niggas with the victory good spit 24 holla back
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hello
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