freestyle
 

this is a freestyle i spit today with a few buddy's when we were just fuckin around, tell me what you think...


i'ma be sick til i die
the only glich in this guy is the twitch in my eye(i've devoloped a twitch for some reason)
but even with this flaw i'm still perfected
ill rhymes are contagious but i'm the only one infected
rappin backwards just to come from a different perspective
spittin fire like a dragon
puttin cats in situations not even jack the rippa could imagin
fillin rappers with fear and make em go on the run like nomads
i'll enhance my extensive vocab by studyin the dictionary
fakers aint sayin shit, they sittin there playin pictionary
they could be english teachers and still wouldn't know how to be literary


then i was rudely interrupted by some dumbass but thats ok cause i was runnin out of stuff to say so yea...tell me what you think

anyone?

c'mon ppl

nice key dawg.. the twitch pro'lly comes from too many chems.. I got the same thing, my whole body tho, I done too much E.. that and the K pro'lly has lots ta do with it.. lol.. but yo, that had a nice flow to it.. keep elevatin...
ill rhymes are contagious but i'm the only one infected
rappin backwards just to come from a different perspective
that bar was sick... just had to add it

That was straight.
Yeah, I like the twitch thang too. U shoulda tried to make it a lil' longer though.

this was a dope little free
u had some nice line sin there dawg
like the vocab usage too
nice and constant flow
keep em coming



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thanks so far

yea that was pretty tite.. keep at it.. always uppin sun.. wun

mad uppins....
pretty good metaphors in it for being a freestyle
keep postin

did you say that not believin that it was a freestyle or were you givin me props? just wonderin cause i wasn't sure