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Swift 03-29-03 08:39 AM

Dont Ask
 
do we now whut the fuck we really fightin for/
we sit back and relax while da man is kickin down da door
im sick of bein casted into a fuckin shadow and not told why/
leave us in the dark but then tell us ta salute wit pride
whut used to be the basis of the american dream/
is now instituted by politics as a diabolical get rich scheme
we fight for money, respect, power and fame/
and we all die wit the same damn shame
but we're yet to notice all the fuckin problems we have/
we only care about portfolio's and gettin broke off half
even education is a fuckin fight to the top of da class/
2.0 or lower and u get dismissed like yesterdays trash
i cant even go to skool wit out it bein a competition/
and den dey wonder why r kids have so much confliction
within them, and the only way they let it out is to scream and shout/
but fuck it whut am i talkin about
i got to go to work to raise the bar so none of ya otha niggas pass me/
why'd i even write dis shit u kno whut dont ask me

tRiLL 03-29-03 12:08 PM

vocab was alrite, flow was alrite, not bad but not very good either

C-Section 03-29-03 12:35 PM

this was nice, dont worry about the vocab you dont need big vocab if you get your point across.

BlUnT-MC 03-29-03 02:47 PM

not bad, didn't really get into the flow, some a'ight bars...

"we only care about portfolio's and gettin broke off half
even education is a fuckin fight to the top of da class/"...

up your vocab a little bit, it really helps..

xLogicalProphetx 03-29-03 05:54 PM

this was str8 dawg
saw the message in it
tried to come deep
i feel you on that seeing as how i am a deep person
but its was a str8 spit
keep em coming


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