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Burning Orphen 03-29-03 11:11 AM

Burning Orphen vs MC Butterfly
 
20 lins max 14 min
you got 30 mins to post after i do
i'll spit first

Burning Orphen 03-29-03 11:17 AM

here we go

You silly girl//
You goin make me hurl with all the rhymes that you spit//
The only thing you need to spit my cum outta your mouth//
after I jack off in it//
You stupid trick//
I'm numero uno//
dont even try to hang with dis//
my shits tight//
just like your moms ass last night//
I didnt want to be one you commit suicide to//
everytime i spit you kown its goin to be sick//
its like da bengals vs da bucs//
you got no chance againest me//
this match is mine//
go home and get some new rhymes//
cause your weak shit aint goin to work here, bitch//

Burning Orphen 03-29-03 11:36 AM

I forgot to say 3 to win 3 k.o.

MC Butterfly 03-29-03 11:42 AM

I didnt want to be one you commit suicide to---STOLEN LINE!!!!!!


Bitch ass line stealin prick, ur so fuckin thick u can't think ov ur own shit//
U think I'm bothered about swallowin cum? Well ur dad certainly aint and neithers ur mom//
What he gonna do now I'm talkin bout his mother? Fuckin nothin bitch coz his dads also his brother!//
Ur sayin ur an orphan like ur parents have died, well they aint, they still livin, u just want them denied//
Byt we know all about them and their sick sad ways//
And u cant be denyin for the rest ov ur days//
Ur father's a gay and he sux like a Dyson, I'm hittin U back harder than a jab from mike tyson//
Ur rhymes are so whack, I'd take them all back and apologise for wastin my precious time//
I got better things to do than rip a fuck rat like u//
U dont got game, u wont get fame, u rhyme so lame and I'm still bein tame!//
Don't let me uleashe the fury inside, u'll be ripped so bad u'll wish that u'd died//
when I started to spit, but U gotta deal with it so fuck this shit//
I think that I've hit evry nerve that I've aimed for//
U can't take me no more//
My style is so clean, I'm an MC machine, I'm the American dream//
But I'm from the UK and it's all I gotta say//
Fuck this iv it aint a 20 liner//
I'm bored with ur shit so I'll punch you in the face, leavin U with a shiner//
Don't forget the 'Fly Coz she's ripped u so good, we know about u and we've lived in ur 'hood//
So now u've heard me with my second MC, go get ur own lines iv U wanna battle the b.

Thank U!

Uppin votes *b*

Shady_cb 03-29-03 11:59 AM

Shady_cb, no contest MC Butterfly by 8 miles

MC Butterfly 03-29-03 12:01 PM

What can I say ;o) some ppl r just talented

MC Butterfly 03-29-03 12:32 PM

UPPIN VOTES!!!!!!!!!
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CRASH AND BURN, ORPHAN

Quik-$pit 03-29-03 12:58 PM

LMFAO AT BOTH OF YOU!!!!!!

Yo Orphan if you gonna bite a rhyme of sumone else's (8 mile)
then quote it
EG:- "like BLAH BLAH said "i dont want to be the one you commit suicide to"

Your lines where too short and simple ELEVATE

MC-Butterfly you have elevate alot since our battle (eventho its still goin on).
your lines are longer and you threw in some multi's which i like but your flow wasn't very good

Poll Vote= MC-Butterfly

Pz

arkatK 03-29-03 01:08 PM

vote butterfly

she came a little harder. little better wordplay
burning orphan anne you just need to sign off and forget computers even exist..

MC Butterfly 03-29-03 01:19 PM

That looks like 3votes to me, wer u at Orphan u aint postin on ur own battle ground. Hiding in shame? ah well, better luck next time huh?

*b*


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