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Mendez 03-30-03 12:15 PM

Here We Go
 
I was Born with a Natural High - Thats why me Spirit Can Fly
Give me the Evil Eye, No Headaches for this Badboy here
Cause I'm the one that you hear about - Some even Fear about
There is No Doubt there something going wrong in My Brain.
I'm insane in the vein - Hit me I'm lovin the Pain
I need adrenalin or else I won't be levelin
I don't smoke Chronic - Love my Gin Tonic
High Risk, Mystic and a little Twisted.........

roux 03-30-03 12:18 PM

sketchy, all over the place, but nice vocab. what do i know, i'm brand new

MeNTiLL 03-30-03 12:21 PM

Sketchy? Yes...But Good vocab? No...Wat's he^ talkin' bout? But that's not important...But yea...U need to learn how to structure ya lines...Use multi's...Juss elevate ya whole style...Peace

UNFADEABLE 03-30-03 12:30 PM

ya your delivery made it very difficult to catch the flow. work on multis and wordplay also. just keep practicin


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