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words greater expression!!
this manuscript of rhymes writ getting the minds of dying times slit
words defying myth outpacing print with intent the bible came with fools grabbing within attacks an eyeful of sin up taking sobriety again buying a brighter chalk my writers block builds a horrible labyrinth and only then long after its been copy written or sloppily mentioned in indecision i slowly vision the superstition that imprisons religion as i find that when my minds tapped i can combine a beauty to fact keep track of my weak stats love one soul with these gibberish raps expose day and night do you pray for flight elevating to new heights call me lefty cause in my head im not all right caught dead in sight many would scour for the gun criticism falls victim to the power of one darkness equal’s none as I alone have grown abilities to tower the sun with out doubt I could stay all day and shout as the chorus is about from my flesh i tear words of life and put them into text with a hit from a spliff i uplift kids to expand their best psychology spoken logically with hidden meaning in it think overtime i spit their maybe a different reason to it at 20 yrs old i freshly sport a baby face keeping my joints crazy laced getting these alcoholic anthems more support then amazing grace consider this the last of a fading taste that is currently taking place a sky high terrify elevated to touch outer space formed for a jokers card an MC graveyard where brave hearts claim the name of underground stealing their sound from the heads of the dead when no ones around hold me liable for what I found and watch empires take turns to burn once a gift takes time to learn now confirmed past the point of no return from my flesh i tear words of life and put them into text with a hit from a spliff i uplift kids to expand their best psychology spoken logically with hidden meaning in it think overtime i spit their maybe a different reason to it |
now that shit right there was deep like cuts on skinny girls...yo i really enjoyed readin this no criticism...theres nothin bad about this one right here...nice drop...one
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So you're Joey Terrifying, eh?...didn't realise till i saw it in another post...
Anyway, gotta say...this was quite a heavy piece... ...had quite a lot fo depth to it...more than one or two levels...really got the reader right into the piece, and what you were talking about... ....like an on the edge ride of emotions n raw imagery, depicted the 'issues' at hand very well.. really, felt this through and through... .respect... |
yea this is me now. joe got banned so this is my alias. big ups on ya 2
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hmm...this is the best piece ive seen so far....nice flow, tight deep vocabs, ill concept and content....madd ill....keep onit
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thanks
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