Open Mic.. hope it's tight... keystyle
 

just a keystyle.. if there's a break between two lines like this

that's because I'm at work and I want this to be keystyle, so whenever I get the ambition to do work, I'll do a page break and continue when I'm done working....

havin a hard time pushin' bars up outta my mind
at large now and droppin' large bars that'r' more like rhymes
formed like fat dimes, packed in with more weight
heavy shit like it was straight from jurasic park one, take
2, made 2 rude, slay you 2, lay low dude
I spray form, formed from cold lead turned hot
pulled trigger, pop, ya-ass is dropped

Hey, how's y'all doin' my styles is fluent
your shit's runny and boering like fluid, pouring
no wait drippin' like you had pasties and tried spittin'
my rhymes clippin' like jumbo-jets on the eleventh
septmber, you'll never stop my terror
remember, I'll leave you broke like jumpin' cab fare
or milkin' welfare, or homless in a shelter
I'm-a cut you up like helter-skelter,

pissed like prison liquor
my rhymes got no jist 'cause I'm a blunt rapper
sicker than pussy with cancer
and every std you could picture
*in-sikure* that's why my wrists need stitches (insecure)
I specialize in self incisions
released on probation with conditions
which-is, just fine with me
they only keep peace and don't asso-c
ate with my criminal mates
great, now I ain't got no *frainds* (friends)
fuck that, exactally...
fuck tha police..

yea, well that's about it...

what up with sleepers...

i liked your rhyme scheme on this one..punch line and similies were on point...bars were too short though but maybe thats what you were aimin for...but overall i liked this one...nice drop dunny..one

I really wasn't try'n for short bars, it just kinda happened.. keystyle's come like that, I thought the 3rd verse was best and that was shortest one... to each his own I suppose... Thanx for the feedback yo...

.Dope.
 

Hey, your spit was nice. I liked the wordplay, you fucked around with niggas head's 'n' shit. You rockin' it... I'm uppin' this joint.

seen bro... thx 4 feedback..

uppin'....

snore..... zzzzzzzzzzz........ STOP SLEEPING........

uppin'

aight, the whole schemee was allright the first verse was good, it sounds like my drop on murda gun talk cypher, i like ryhmes like this, i didnt feel a stretched flow, its prolly cuz u split a few multies into 2 werds, bt either way, its a keystyle its sposed to sound like that, good drop OnE

thx yo.. uppin' this shit some more..

reppin MP 2 da fullest! yo Blunt i liked ya shit it was on point-great similes and technique. keep it up dawg!

yea yea....