~Fugitive~
 

just some shit I made up, trying to be creative and shit... check it out...

Look at this luck I’ve received,
who gives a fuck if I live,
see I’m a fucked fugitive,/
wanna know the reason?
Then pay attention, listen,
man I just escaped from prison/
and they’re wanting me back,
see if you're wack with the rap,
then yo you taking the wrap...

I got convicted for mine,
see when you fuck up in rhymes,
that’s like a lyrical crime... get sent to jail,
if u can’t upgrade your skill then u can’t make bail,
and yo what if you fail?, then u forever in jail/
this time it holds a life sentence,
with no parole, end of sentence,
there's nothing more, that's your chances...

Evidently, my lawyer didn’t defend me,
think his briefcase was all empty,
someone out there tried to frame me/
claiming I misused, abused,
the base of hip-hop’s use,
man I was wrongfully accused,
someone out there got the jury all confused...
with fake documents of something filthy,
though I rapped in-it and claimed me guilty...

They blew the case in my face,
the evidence of my defense was out of place,
without a trace, shit got erased…
shit it just happened some how,
so now they're clapping they're rounds
soon they'll have gotten me down,
and like a dog I'm gon' get dragged to the pound...
(to be continued)

Peace

damm, I know y'all can say something... come on

yo this shit was hot as hell dog, much props

are you still a fugitive?

uuhh sum of tha lines wre hitten but i think peeps would feel it more if u layed it out diff... rite now its layed out like.. in stanzas... feel like i'm in english ya no? but its still koo.. do ya thang, thats jsut my opinion

yeah thanx, I've been gettin' alot about that... I'll try and take it under consideration, peace

im feelin the same way
you gotta come harder

true, true, it's a keystyle... what do you want... lol...

I`m juss spittin....nothing personal

Hey yo.... diz iz wut I do//
I`m writing diz for you//
so you can read diz shit//
and take yo lips off yo mama`s clit//

I neva battle cats, unless dey put up a good fight//
My mic is like mah bitch, cuz I`m on it everynight//
My rhyme is about done, now I have to bounce//
Go to gym, and lift some weights, and loose a couple poundz!!

damm it! at least add a decent reply in there...