1st freestyle on this msg board
 

Yo yo check it my name is Mexicoz Shorty/
I'm no fuckin 40/
Yo im here representing the mexicans aka the minority/
Fuckin cops beat me with a stick say they have the authority/
I've been at this rap shit for a while/
some fuckers just start after they seen "8mile"/
Dont make me put u on trial/
I've been rhyming for bout a year/
You can call me the freestyle muskateer/
I'm here rapping wit my killa ass rhyme/
Thats it im done im all outa time/
I'll be back later so u can hear more yack yack yack/
I'm prolly at McDonalds eating me a "BIG MAC"/
Holla back

~Mexicoz Shorty

If any one wants to comment on it please do. I would like to know peoples oppinions. Also if anyone can give me advise on making my raps better let me know, I'll appreciate it.

Thanks
~~**Mexicoz Shorty**~~

dawg you have to reply to 2 open mics before you can drop anything.... go reply to 2 and i will give you feedback